Tag: Writing

A spy mouse

                                             

                                                   John the spy  mouse

 

John plans a heist to go and get  cheese for himself. He looked  at all the houses on Mount Wellington Highway but not this good looking house. He  sneaked up to the window and he saw some cheese but it had a trap. John quickly   jumped because the owner was coming to the window . John  went to the other side and  dug a hallway through the wall.  Luckily his drill was quiet  because John’s group  made it. When they made the hole  John went through and checked if there was any  place to get the cheese without getting killed. It  was dark for him to see anything so got his touch and turned it on. When he looked up he  saw a hole at the top. John had to figure out a way to get there. He  went to the hole and dug more room for him to live there. He built a stairs to go up to the  ceiling and dug another hallway to the hole that he saw. He said to his  manager “ I have a good view to get the cheese but the owner is on the couch in the living room” then the manager replied “ just go fast and get it before he gets there”. John attached the rope to the hook. When he went down he screamed “ahhhhh!” and the owner was like “ who is screaming in my house.  He went for it and got the cheese and quickly went back. Then he told his manager to come through the hallway into the room. They all had a slice of cheese and  Coke Cola. The manager and his group decided to live there and plan their heist. John got  a certificate for being the best thief of the team and helping the team when they were starving. The owner  put cheese on the trap again and everyone died but not John. Then he decided to ask the owner if he wanted to keep him as a pet. After 13 years John became strong and he was only 15 years old. Then it was  his birthday and he got a little car  for him to drive. When The owner asked where his friends were and  John said ” they died in that mouse trap you put”. The owner felt sad for him so he bought 3 more mouse   for john to play with. When he played with is new friends  they decided to play some football.

 

Choose It Narrative.

                                                           The walking adventure

Today it was sunny so I went for a walk.. I walked all the way to Papakura to see my cousin. While I walked I saw 3 planes in the water. I thought I should go there in the afternoon. I told my mum at my cousin’s house if I could go there and she said yes. That afternoon I went to see it and it was humongous. I went inside and no one was in it. Then there was a pilot and he went off into the sky. I called my mum and told her that I was in the air. Then we went all the way to Saudi Arabia and Ronaldo, my favorite player, was waiting for me. I was confused, why was he there? He gave me his football shirt and I got to go to his match. I had the best life in the world. My mum called me and I told her “look I am having the best life in the world. My pilot took me back home.

 

          part 2:

When I got back to new Zealand I went home. My mum was happy to see me and told me how it was. Then someone called my mum so I went to answer, then they wanted me to talk with them. They give a $50 million  contract at Al-Nassr so I confirm it.  Me and my family took the same plane and went to Saudi Arabia  for my house. At that time I was 18 so I could be in  the team.  Then I  cleaned  my plane.

Lego challenge recount

Beginning: We went to make  the table for  the lego challenge. We started to make the  side so the platform can fit on top. I said “we should put some stuff on the table after “. Mckayla went to get a bowl of legos for us to use to upgrade our  furniture.  Mckayla was the only one to get the lego because she was short. We had a look at  ours and saw what more detail to  put   on our table. Then  Pauliasi put some  detail on the table like a  tv. I put a keyboard,a mouse and a light. My group’s table looked like a gaming table  with gaming stuff on it. Alex  was  just playing with legos and annoying us. We all laugh at Pauliasi jokes. We didn’t have enough time to attach a  camera to our table.We tried to look for that one piece to finish  our table. We finally  finished our  build.

 

 

Middle: Mrs Moala to us to bring our second shortest person to come to get colours from the book bag. Mckenna put out red and blue. Mrs Moala said to make another furniture if you want to. So we all think about a chair to make. Me and Pauliasi imagine what it would look like.  We started, we had a good base for it to  start. Then we wanted to see what we had.

 

End: When Pauliasi saw my work,we worked on it to make it better . Because it was good and nice. We added some cabinets  on the side of the chair. We added a nice design at the top of the chair. We loved how it turned out and

Pauliasi smiled at each other. I felt happy and tired because we had to make a furniture while we got to play with lego.

       The end!